#My Father

I walked into the room, and right before my mother left, I saw the man hanging in the corner. He was about to fall to the ground, but ¹I couldn't get out from under him, and I didn't know what was going to happen. I looked down and saw my father, crying and screaming. ²

I walked into the room, and right before my mother left, I saw the man hanging in the corner. He was about to fall to the ground, but ¹I couldn't get out from under him, and I didn't know what was going to happen. I looked down and saw my father, crying and screaming. ² My father just found out that Stephen King was not a real person but in fact a creation of artificial intelligence. ³'Stephen King was one who had to consider me no good', I said slowly ⁴

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I walked into the room, and right before my mother left, I saw the man hanging in the corner. He was about to fall to the ground, but ¹I couldn't get out from under him, and I didn't know what was going to happen. I looked down and saw my father, crying and screaming. ²

Responses by Shelley are shown in bold.